Quick update for English 9 Wednesday:

Revise your RD of DE Outlines to questions for Poe Story.

1. On your old draft, mark as many of the following errors as you can find:
-incorect headings (correct on old draft) -OFF TOPIC Examples
-Show--\\-> Tell mismatches - "Tells" OT (that answer a different question)
-Vague or redundant "Tells" -missing or unclear context
etc.

2. Creat NEW, REVISED draft. On new one, identify (with bold, itals, color, highlighter--your choice) all the new content that you replaced or fixed. I should see exactly what you changed without needing to compare the old and new side-by-side.

Good papers will find at least 8-10 revisions to change or improve.

Happy Hunting!
("jacket off!--STRONG..."--Mr. Hao) ;)