DUE 1/5: (10 points participation)
Complete all 3 paragraphs of your ROUGH DRAFT of our "resolution" essay from in-class.
This should be free of grammatical and usage errors, but should contain all the awkward, choppy sentences from your first draft. Just make sure that each paragraph is complete. The whole thing should be no shorter than 2o sentences.
Find at least 5 passages where you can combine two or even three closely-related sentences.
Put these on a separate sheet: for each, put the "bad" passage first, followed by the "new," corrected version.
ALSO REMEMBER to review usage rules; we'll go over the final usage test first thing on Wed.!
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