Your only "assignment" for Thursday is to carefully review those initial DEs, making sure that:
-All your paragraphs cohere around logically plausible, and significant main ideas
-You have 3-4 details in each paragraph
-It's really clear that your RH entries themselves clarify "How exactly does it show us what your TS/ heading line of your DEs says?"
IF you're really confident that you have some paragraphs that really do this, of course you can keep them, and of course you should make sure that you keep working on revising the actual sentences for all the entries that you keep. I didn't see any "perfect " writing in today's review: everybody needs to keep working on making your actual sentences smoother, more detailed, less wordy, and clearer (both grammatically and logically!).
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